Etching die-cast enclosures with persulfate will not work, you have to use either Ferric or peroxide/ hydrochloric. I use the latter since the reaction also works at room temperature, and below. So I can put the bowl outside in wintertime and etch PCB's and enclosures without the added hassle of adding boiling water to the "au-bain marie".
You will need to do it outside BTW, because the fumes are pretty awful (and dangerous).
The drawback is that etching with peroxide is "rougher" than the other two methods, it creeps under the etch resist and the reaction is pretty violent, keep a close watch, especially with thin tracks on PCB's.