R8 does indeed connect to C9 (and also one end of the 1gohm R1), otherwise there's nothing to provide the 60v to the capsule backplate.
C4 is, as per the schematic, connected in parallel with R4 and C5 (one end in common, and going to the first triode's cathode, and the other end of each/all going to ground).
R5 does indeed connect to R7, and one end of C8; otherwise there's nothing feeding the B+ high voltage to the first triode's anode; otherwise, no signal.
Regarding wire stripping, unless i need to be doing bulk quantities, i just roll the wire, LIGHTLY (especially if it's thin), between my thumb and a fresh / sharp section of my box-cutter's blade, so i just slice through enough (or even all) of the insulation, but no (or very few) strands of copper, and then just pull off the (mostly) separated piece of insulation.