1. Your soldering can be interpreted in two ways.
Either, you started out really descent, and got impatient, or
You started out a little rough, then got better.
There is a clear difference across the board, and a lot of suspect cold soldering joints, but either you need to just be patient, or keep going with what you learned
I would reflow them. Use a little tin on your tip to get it flowing, and make sure you are heating both the pad and the component terminal.
2. The threshold needs adjustment on a resistor for the 10K pot, relative to using a 50K in the standard GssL. I may have forgotten I just did that on the prototype, and didn't correct it in the file. I cant get to the computer I have the file on now, but whats the voltage on pin 2 fully ccw and fully cw?
Gustav