Howdy!
Please humor me a moment. I am a rookie with good intentions ... but then my road to Heck is well paved with all my good intentions!
* Are you testing with the mic cover off? Did you test it with the head basket and body all put together? If not, reassemble and retest.
* What happens if you cover the microphone with aluminum foil? Your plastic body may not provide sufficient electrical shielding - and you have altered the manufacturer's arrangement with your little capacitors and big wires. I am not criticizing, just saying you have changed it in some way to put it outside of its original operating parameters.
* Most BM-800 type microphones are designed to use either or both 48v from a mixer or audio interface AND 8-10v from a traditional computer sound card. That might, maybe, perhaps explain any apparent voltage anomalies ... or not.
* Some guys specify 22nF capacitors for RF suppression. While I am also a rookie mic builder, I kinda always thought a BC233 is a transistor. A web search suggests 233 pF capacitors, so I wonder if you could double check the name and value of the capacitors you are using? The other fellers will give you better advice with reliable info.
* Wild Shot No. 20987 - I sorta wonder, more than suggest, whether the length of your wires have altered the original design just enough to cause buzzing. Short, thin wires make a shorter antenna less prone to capturing stray RF/EMI/TVI etc. Really thin wires are OK for the short distance from the circuit board to the XLR pins - especially considering you are only dealing with mic level signal strength. It might matter more if you were running substantially higher voltage. I am not saying using heavier gauge wires is bad - just saying shorter, thinner wires will likely be sufficient and maybe act less like an RFI antenna. (Well ... I said it is a wild shot, right?)
* Also - What OTHER DEVICES are operating nearby? We recently had a long running discussion about how to squelch cell phone interference on a Takstar CM-60. I sometimes suffer serious RFI in my transceiver when using an external hard drive dock on the desk near the rig. Fluorescent light ballasts and some older LED lights may cause EMI/RFI. Your BM-800's plastic body may not provide adequate shielding.
* I would move the installation to another computer - or clear away (at least turn off) all other devices which could generate EMI/RFI and see if that isolates an external cause.
Just a few wild stabs in the dark. Good luck. James