That could be it. That circuit will works and is easy to follow.
FWIW, Grasshopper* - Schematic conventions you should follow:
The signal path is left to right.
The Positive voltage supply is at the top.
Ground is on the bottom.
If there was a negative voltage referenced to ground it would generally be drawn below the ground.
AS for the circuit analysis - the 2 jfets are in a cascode configuration feeding Q3, a PNP xstor.
Q4 is a constant current source, or load for that circuit. Q1-4 form a follower circuit (the voltage gain is 1, it's a current amplifier) that takes the capsule voltage and adds current to drive the output. NOTE that this is a single ended circuit, only 1 phase output.
The positive output is off the emitter of Q3 & collector of Q4 and is in phase with the capsule voltage. It is known as the positive phase. The negative phase is AC ground, with phantom positive DC power isolated from ground and audio ground goes through C4.
It acts as a pseudo balanced AC circuit for the signal for noise immunity.
This allows the all the current from the phantom PS to be routed to the positive supply at the top thru R3 & 6 with the supply voltage for the step up DC converter for the capsule's 60V coming through R4,5.
Since the + 60 V supply is not drawn I assume the +15 V 4 supplies the 60 v supply (V1 & V2). The way that it's drawn as 2 separate entities (V1, V2) is, IMHO, not correct. It should be 15 V in and 60V out in one symbol, usually shown as a box with a ground.
I hope this helps you learn good schematic practices, and understand the circuit, no charge.
*Kung Foo TV series.