A couple of other comments on the schematic as drawn -
- The C6/C7 junction isn't really connected to VL, is it? I would expect the bass roll-off switch to be connected between this junction and point H, so it bridges across C7 when closed.
- R8, the FET drain resistor, ought to be more than 1K. In most variants of this circuit it's 20K.
If it helps, there's a schematic for a similar FET configuration here:
https://groupdiy.com/threads/mxl.84887/ which has measured DC voltages. If you're seeing anything wildly different it's probably a clue.